Friday, May 29

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Flash Story: Burnt!

Daniel Nkado



James burst into the house and flung his briefcase aside. He dropped on the couch and jerked his tie off.

The anger was aflame in him. It blazed through him, like a dry field in harmattan season; every nerve, muscle and organ was red-hot.


Sweat poured off him.

Breathing was difficult.

It was all Elizabeth’s fault. The devil he had married.

Now, again, he began to wonder why he actually married that woman. Why he travelled all the way to Mba-mmiri to pay her bride price.

To marry the devil.

She has been the witch sitting on his progress all this while. It wasn’t so hard to see now.

Was it not after their wedding that he lost his job? Was it not during the preparation of the wedding that his car finally packed up?

And now again, she has caused him to flop this interview. His only hope of ever getting back on his feet again.

What evil did I marry, James asked himself. His fingers dug into his scalp.

He has lost count of how many times he’d had to warn her not to tamper with his things. All his important stuff.

But the devil never listens.

Last night, while he was snoring sprawled on the bed, Elizabeth had opened his briefcase and taken his evidence of ACCA certification and some other of his credentials.

Her sister’s father-in-law has just retired his accountant and sought a quick replacement. Elizabeth had talked with him over the phone that night and pleaded with the wealthy chief to consider her husband.

Because James had earlier told her he would be having an important meeting the next day, she’d assured the rich man that she would bring him all the documents he asked for herself.

So she had taken them and gone.

And the chief was impressed. ‘Tell your husband he can start on Monday,’ he told Elizabeth.

At James's meeting which later turned into an interview, he couldn’t provide any of the documents they asked of him.

Because his wife has taken them.

And he came home a raging mess.

A knock came on the door and the furious man quickly got up.

He didn’t allow his wife to fully come through the door before he thrust his palm to her face. ‘Foolish woman! What have you done with all my certificates?’

Before she could utter a word, he shoved her, obviously a bit too carelessly than he’d intended.

As she fell, the plump woman slammed her head to the edge of the glass table.

She straightened out on the carpet in death.

Only then did the fury finally leave James.

Greater troubling emotions quickly occupied his empty self.

Guilt. Regret. Confusion.

TERROR!

15 comments:

  1. Wow! Double wahala. Nice on Dan

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  2. Oh my God! Anger is a deadly weapon.

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    1. Imagine, and the wife has good news already.
      Hot temper z so destructive

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  4. What just happened? Too fast paced I will just go read it again.

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    1. Bad communication skill.If only he have informed her of the interview, and if she have told him before she remove the documents this should have been averted!

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  5. Something he will Neva forget in his life. That little scene or mistake will hurt him for the rest of his life.

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  6. If only we learn to control our anger

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  7. Shooting first,apologizing later is very bad!

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  8. God forbid daniel i dont like dis wah msg re yu trying to pass across remove dis story it encourages violence agsinst women

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    1. No, Emmanuel, it doesn't. It is just a way of saying, 'Let your anger not burn you.'

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  9. hmm true we shud always learn to control our anger

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  10. Wow!!! Communication is very important.

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